Academic Shoot Critic

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I like how the student used the rule of lines in the first pictures to make the trophies stand out more. I also like how he used the rule of thirds in the third photo by adjusting the subject to the top of the photo.

I think that he could of had a better focus on his pictures to make the subject more clear. He could also make the lighting better in the second photo.

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